Sorry I've been away for so long. I've been deep in edits trying to get draft number three done. I've now gone through the entire ms and, if my kids ever stop asking for snacks or trying to kill one another, I will soon be able to sit down and start entering my edits.
In the meantime, Nathan Bransford posted a query letter he received that sent him "into a partial requesting frenzy." The query was from from Lisa Brackmann who's novel ROCK, PAPER, TIGER (great title) will be published in 2010. Check out her letter.